2007年3月5日 星期一

Today we had learned the poem " Voices of the Night " by " Longfellow's " , we learn a lesson form his lecture , that he tokd us don't give up as you face difficalts and you have to be braver as you suffer discairage and he say , if you believe yourself , you'll become internal !

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Hi,

It's good response! Some mistaken words are the following.

"that he tokd (told) us (not to)don't give up as you face difficalts and you have to be braver as you suffer discairage (discharge). Furethermore, he say , if you believe yourself , you'll become internal (eternal)!"

Please use word spelling to check your article.